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雅思A类小作文:多饼动态图(3)

2021-09-17 雅思 阅读


​WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 

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The charts below show the percentage of water used by various sectors in Australia in 1997 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the key features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Write at least 150 words

 

 

MODEL ESSAY

7分范文 

 

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1The two pie charts compare the proportions of water consumption for five different sectors in Australia in two years- 1997 and 2007. 2The most salient feature of the graph is the considerably larger amount of water consumed by the food industry in the given years.

 

3In 1997, the food industry was the biggest consumer of water accounting for roughly half of the total water use. Although this value presented a 7% decline in 2007, this sector was by far the largest consumer of water. Interestingly, the amount of water used for construction purposes respectively comprised values as low as 2% and 7% in 1997 and 2007- making it the smallest consumer of water amongst all sectors.

 

4As for domestic water use, a slight rise could be observed in the figures for water consumption by households in these years. By contrast, the amount of water used by the manufacturing sector underwent a 4% drop compared to its corresponding value in 1997. The most dramatic change came about in the service industry revealing a surge of roughly 50% in water use- rendering it the second largest sector in this respect.  

 

5By and large, although the figures for water consumption fluctuated across all sectors, food sector remained the leading consumer of water, whereas the building industry retained its position as the sector with the lowest demand for water use.

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1. Introduction (type of graph and variable)

2. General trend (the most observable pattern)

3. A more detailed view of the given data (the most notable patterns)

4. Further elaboration on the similarities and differences between the changes in the variables

5. Conclusion (a comparison of the most observable similarities and differences)

 

 

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