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雅思G类小作文:与歌手通信(1)

2021-09-17 雅思 阅读

WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 

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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel.

 

Write a letter to the singer. In your letter

 

 Say how you feel about his performance

 Give details of your musical activities

 Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Write at least 150 words

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

 

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear .....,  

 

MODEL ESSAY

7分范文 

 

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1Dear Ray,

 

2Thanks for inviting me backstage the other night at your concert. It was a rare privilege to watch you warm-up and participate in your vocal exercises before the show. As always, you are an amazing and dynamic performer. 

 

3I have admired your abilities as a vocalist and songwriter since I was a kid.  You remain a true inspiration as I pursue my own journey in music.

 

4Now that my band has recorded an EP, and, with your assistance, garnered the attention of Capital Records’ A&R Director Mitch Gordon in Montreal, I need your help again.

 

5The boys and I were wondering if you had the time to help us consider the options put forth by Mitch and the legal gang at the label.  You’ve always advised us to approach the business side of the industry with great care and caution.  Your opinion (based on your vast knowledge and experience) would mean so much to us.

 

6Any assistance you can provide is greatly appreciated.

 

7I really enjoyed the backstage pass and vocal lesson. One day, I hope to be able to repay all the favours and kindnesses you have shown me over the years.

 

8Sincerely,

 

Larry

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1. Salutation

2. Opening

3. Background Details

4. Main Intent

5. Reason of Importance

6. Appreciation and closing

7. Complimentary close

8. Signature Line

 

 

 

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